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The Smell of Air

the smell of air
in drizzle where
time traveling I arrived

was such a rush
of feelings lush
which somehow had survived

the many years
and all the tears
the joys and pleasures too

as all alone
it felt like home
the way that I once knew

as mists of time
dispersed to find
the way I used to feel

when I was young
and in among
my senses' raw appeal

when every day
was me at play
as enchantment oozed

in sun or rain
I felt the same
excited and amused

with feelings lush
inside the hush
somewhere in my mind

the drizzle there,
the smell of air
transported me through time
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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Author's Note
Best listened to with headphones....it was a drizzly day which led me to recall how I felt as a child in England
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