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I know you will never be mine
Truth weighs heavy, deep inside
My hope brittle and falling apart
As I carve your moniker into my heart
Truth weighs heavy, deep inside
My hope brittle and falling apart
As I carve your moniker into my heart
Published 30th May 2020
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Heartbreak takes time to heal. Hope you feel better after writing this poem. Keep on writing.
31st May 2020 5:15am
Dear S,
Alas, I think most of us have been in this boat. Always holding a torch for a love that ended in an outcome less than positive. I hope this will be of short duration for you. A touching write well written. H🌷
Alas, I think most of us have been in this boat. Always holding a torch for a love that ended in an outcome less than positive. I hope this will be of short duration for you. A touching write well written. H🌷
1st Jun 2020 3:26am
It's so hard to walk away from something that you want so badly but that doesn't want you the same... I'm still trying to learn how
1st Jun 2020 3:29am
Totally get it. If you figure it will you let me know how it's done? Hang in there and give yourself loads of time and room to keep circling. I think you’ll come out the other side of this much stronger and more appreciative of yourself. H🌷
1st Jun 2020 3:39am
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
6th Aug 2020 6:28pm
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