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He Moved Her Hair Out Of The Way
He borrowed
her heart
yet stole
her soul.
All alone
she's just
a stone,
waiting.
her heart
yet stole
her soul.
All alone
she's just
a stone,
waiting.
Published 29th May 2020
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29th May 2020 00:31am
Great feeling, flow... unfortunately a real sadness and real life situation. Another heart wrenching tale! 😂. Great work Nick...
29th May 2020 00:37am
29th May 2020 3:46am
Ouch! Kerplunk. Amazing how you capture the essence of an emotion with both brevity of words and image.
29th May 2020 4:15am
29th May 2020 4:45am
Dear N,
Noooo say it isn’t so. Not with those kick ass shoes. No despair here. I won’t have it. The shoes are just too awesome. (So is the write) but the shoes...H🌷
Noooo say it isn’t so. Not with those kick ass shoes. No despair here. I won’t have it. The shoes are just too awesome. (So is the write) but the shoes...H🌷
29th May 2020 1:16pm
Thank you!!
These poor shoes, i got them last year and wore the fuck out of them 😄 they're one my favorites, they go with everything.
All my shoes are loud. I like cool shoes.
These poor shoes, i got them last year and wore the fuck out of them 😄 they're one my favorites, they go with everything.
All my shoes are loud. I like cool shoes.
29th May 2020 5:43pm
1st Jun 2020 8:36am
The sinking heaviness .. the stony destiny ..innall inertness it is made now... you verse the emotions like no other. a modern art of your own uniqueness Nik!
