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OTHER FOREVER

Journey is reward
So let us just flirt with each
Other forever
SatInUGal
Written by SatInUGal (Kumar)
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Re. OTHER FOREVER
(Tams)
22nd May 2020 00:51am
I love this! Taking it too far can kill it at times.
Ahavati
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Re: Re. OTHER FOREVER
(Kumar)
22nd May 2020 00:53am
Yes let it liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive
SatInUGal
Re: Re. OTHER FOREVER
(Tams)
22nd May 2020 00:55am
lol
Ahavati
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Re. OTHER FOREVER
(k.)
22nd May 2020 2:37am
A lesson I wish I had learned earlier!
brokentitanium
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Re: Re. OTHER FOREVER
(Kumar)
22nd May 2020 2:41am
*not sure I've learned it yet
SatInUGal
Re. OTHER FOREVER
22nd May 2020 4:36am
flirtation stretched far and wide towards forevereverever is truly one of the sweeter heart medicines
silent_sound
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Re: Re. OTHER FOREVER
(Kumar)
22nd May 2020 4:55am
Livin’ Lovin’
SatInUGal
Re: Re. OTHER FOREVER
22nd May 2020 5:01am
something like that!
silent_sound
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Re. OTHER FOREVER
23rd May 2020 9:19am
excellent idea - nice form
SweetOblivion
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