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Made Me See

the first to truly believe
giving fuel to the flames
attitude what we conceive
we manipulated with games
my brother we were evil
spitting on others faith
fearless like Mr. Knievel
walked with Crowley’s praise
 
what happened to us
was it trivial fiction
our strengthened truss
opened to depiction
 
you had success  
forgot about me
what once depressed
made me fucking see
 
i only fed off the scraps
honing my writing abilities
with a mere perhaps
you influenced my activities
did you not realize
i’d come into my own
climb the trees
find the significant zone
 
where was the so called love
shunning my spiritual growth
you were the demon above
questioning my circle of worth
does it burn you
my lyrics are better
what was once true
you’re a neglectful shepherd
 
what happened to us
was it trivial fiction
our strengthened truss
opened to depiction
 
you had success  
forgot about me
what once depressed
made me fucking see
 
in my conscience
i heard the black
you once directed
i was an apt pupil
but i grew bigger
without consent
i’m the subtle trigger
crumbling your discontent
 
what happened to us
was it trivial fiction
our strengthened truss
opened to depiction
 
you had success  
forgot about me
what once depressed
made me fucking see
 
 
 
 
Written by diamonddave75
Published | Edited 8th Jun 2020
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