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Unearthing
I never realised that...
while searching for the 'right' words
to express my feelings and emotions
I would find me...
after all poetry is a journey
within oneself...
It's a rendezvous with solitude and stillness...
... and there you meet a stranger-
a beautiful one
who lay hidden from you all your life...
Yes, your very own
... your soul
while searching for the 'right' words
to express my feelings and emotions
I would find me...
after all poetry is a journey
within oneself...
It's a rendezvous with solitude and stillness...
... and there you meet a stranger-
a beautiful one
who lay hidden from you all your life...
Yes, your very own
... your soul
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
12th May 2020 9:26pm
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Writing is a kind of meditation where you really unearth the 'real' you...we are in an illusion that we know ourselves... But we really discover that through self introspection and writing is one of the ways we unconsciously engage in self introspection or assessment
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12th May 2020 9:30pm
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12th May 2020 9:32pm
I'm so glad that it resonates with you, dear poetess ... Thank you kindly for the read and the RL add... Means a lot to me :)
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12th May 2020 9:38pm
You are most welcome ... I really love your work ... so grateful to be able to read another ...
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12th May 2020 9:40pm
and the feeling is mutual lildragonfly dearest... I admire your work a lot.
Thanks for the support :)
Thanks for the support :)
Re. Unearthing
13th May 2020 3:25am
Poetry is a journey to what is inside our heart and mind. Keep on writing.
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13th May 2020 3:28am
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13th May 2020 8:11am
So calming are your words. Poetry is a friend I love to explore. Great ink.
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13th May 2020 9:05am
Oh, that's a lovely comment, DC. I'm happy to know it had a tranquil effect on you.
Thanks a lot for honouring it with the RL add.
Thanks a lot for honouring it with the RL add.
Re. Unearthing
13th May 2020 7:13pm
Your writing is a welcome sight ! I've had trouble finding faceted writes such as this here lately. It's exquisite and breathtaking; such a good feel to it.
Welcome to the Deep, Pandy♥️🌼
Welcome to the Deep, Pandy♥️🌼
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14th May 2020 2:55pm
Oh my God! That's such a great compliment! I can't thank you enough, dear poetess. So glad and thankful for the encouraging words. It's an honour to find both my poems on your RL.
Thanks 😊🌼
Thanks 😊🌼
Re. Unearthing
15th May 2020 1:21pm
This is quite lovely; it possesses a very soothing revelation of spirit. I am unsure I agree with it hiding from us as much as I believe it waits for us to come home.
Lovely.
Lovely.
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15th May 2020 10:41pm
Thank you so much. I very much appreciate your thoughts on this piece. Your view made me rethink and I have edited the line 'who has been hiding' to 'who lay hidden'... implying that it was there but we couldn't see it... Anyway, ultimately we did discover it. Thanks to poetry 🙏😊
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15th May 2020 10:44pm
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17th May 2020 8:00pm
OMFG!!!!
our daily journals ALWAYS unearth so much mulch, so much wet, so much light!!
This spill could be applicable to one's spiritual growth (life)!!
Very much appreciative of Your share ----- this spill
our daily journals ALWAYS unearth so much mulch, so much wet, so much light!!
This spill could be applicable to one's spiritual growth (life)!!
Very much appreciative of Your share ----- this spill
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18th May 2020 3:05pm
You are absolutely right, dear poet... This poem suggests that poetry is one of the doors to spirituality...writing helps in exploring ourselves and thus contributes in our spiritual growth.
I'm so elated with your fantastic review. It means a lot to me. Thanks a lot for the RL add.
I'm so elated with your fantastic review. It means a lot to me. Thanks a lot for the RL add.
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25th May 2020 4:06pm
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25th May 2020 5:43pm
Very much appreciate your gracious presence on my page. And thank you very much for adding this to your reading list. :)
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- Edited 16th Oct 2021 11:45pm
4th Oct 2021 6:02pm
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4th Oct 2021 6:41pm
Thanks a lot, dear DW for your really kind comment... 🌹 I so adore your visits😊😊😊
Re. Unearthing
14th Oct 2022 1:14am
The most beautiful poem of the most beautiful poet
I sailed in these two verses that sum it all up
And there you meet a stranger-
Nice
who's been hiding from you all your life."
You really amaze me
I sailed in these two verses that sum it all up
And there you meet a stranger-
Nice
who's been hiding from you all your life."
You really amaze me
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14th Oct 2022 8:43am
I'm so delighted by your thoughtful n kind review. You are so sweet. Glad you liked my piece, dear MP. Thank you 🙏
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14th Oct 2022 11:37am
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1st Feb 2023 3:08pm
Again, the image is bright, but when you look closely there is a lot of feeling in the bird. You have a talent with these cards.
Regards
James
Regards
James
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2nd Feb 2023 7:38am