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Let's Fly Together
A songbird singing in the woods
I am looking for my other half
That is my song, that's me
You heard my call and answered
Bringing me into your life
Now there is happiness in my song
And we are flying together
It is our song carried on the wind
Let's make this feeling last
I want this elation to be forever
I give you this feeling too
How many songs are in my heart
Let me continue to soar with you
Spreading wings high in the clouds
Smile and look around at the beauty
Time passes very quickly and so
I want to dream with you now
Our passion burns so intensely
In unison in this colorful world
Let's make this feeling last
I am looking for my other half
That is my song, that's me
You heard my call and answered
Bringing me into your life
Now there is happiness in my song
And we are flying together
It is our song carried on the wind
Let's make this feeling last
I want this elation to be forever
I give you this feeling too
How many songs are in my heart
Let me continue to soar with you
Spreading wings high in the clouds
Smile and look around at the beauty
Time passes very quickly and so
I want to dream with you now
Our passion burns so intensely
In unison in this colorful world
Let's make this feeling last
Author's Note
I read NewBeginnings I know Why the Caged Bird Sings and it made me want to write something with birds in it. If you have not read the one I mentioned you should, it is very beautiful and far better than my scribbling.
I am not a writer or poet so please don't judge me to harshly. I have been reading many on the site and I am experimenting a little with writing, formatting, and adding pictures. I was not expecting to really write much but everyone has been so nice with my first one I thought I would try again. :) (I still probably will not write much)
I am not a writer or poet so please don't judge me to harshly. I have been reading many on the site and I am experimenting a little with writing, formatting, and adding pictures. I was not expecting to really write much but everyone has been so nice with my first one I thought I would try again. :) (I still probably will not write much)
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Re. Let's Fly Together
11th May 2020 11:17pm
I can tell that you are dreamer and romantic. I like it and you express yourself
very well. Stick with it, ad what you thank you do best.
very well. Stick with it, ad what you thank you do best.
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Thank you adagio. I really value your opinion. Yes, I am definitely a dreamer and romantic but I do have my negative emotions, feelings, and experiences as well so that might show sometimes. :)
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13th May 2020 00:05am
Re. Let's Fly Together
13th May 2020 4:42am
Beautiful lines, beautiful one. I'm so glad you were inspired by NB, you captured the essence with grace.. Again, a huge welcome. Pandy♥️
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13th May 2020 10:57pm
Thank you Pandora. It is easy to get inspired here, maybe I will try writing more. :) I am so glad you liked it. Being new, I am still a bit hesitant but your comments give me some encouragement.
Re. Let's Fly Together
3rd Jun 2020 6:53pm
Us Werewolves don't have wings, but in spite of our savage reputation, we can still appreciate beauty.
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3rd Jun 2020 10:12pm
I figured on a vampire but werewolves are primal and fun so what's not to like. :)
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4th Jun 2020 2:26pm
Male Vampires are arrogant buggers, I don't tend to get on with them much. But the female ones are awesome, feisty, sexy, seductive, (and I know they'll suck n swallow.)
Even monsters need those tender moments between two kindred spirits, It helps them feel alive in their undead world and share sensations unlike anything the living can comprehend, then they'll head off into the night and enjoy a spell of carnal savagery fulled by the ever addictive taste of living blood.
Woof! XXX
Even monsters need those tender moments between two kindred spirits, It helps them feel alive in their undead world and share sensations unlike anything the living can comprehend, then they'll head off into the night and enjoy a spell of carnal savagery fulled by the ever addictive taste of living blood.
Woof! XXX
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Re. Let's Fly Together
24th Jan 2021 6:08pm
I read this as I listen to the birds chirp outside my window. Even though it was chilly and rainy last night they seem content in their nests. I too, hope you are content with your songbird in your nest.
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24th Jan 2021 8:40pm
That is really sweet DaVinci. Thank you so much for reaching back and finding this one and the kind words. I like chilly and rain; and according to the British I am a bird. lol
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Regarding the Brits - I'm sure a few "bird whistles" have been directed your way. 🐦 🤣
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31st Jan 2021 7:58pm
Hi Mystic... timely and timeless. :) Thank you so much for the comments and I am happy that in looking back to my older you posts you found and enjoyed this one. :) xo
Re. Let's Fly Together
19th Mar 2021 5:59am
Let's Fly Together your spreading your wings, yours is not scribbling poetess . xx
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19th Mar 2021 12:21pm
I love the idea of flying. :) Thank you so much for the comment and reaching back to find this one. I am happy if you enjoyed it. xx
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Re: Re. Let's Fly Together
12th Aug 2022 00:30am
Well I definitely did not expect to see this one come up in my updates Tim. :) I have not read that author's note in so long. I am still not sure about being a poet but I adore that you think so. Love always has the most possibilities, right? I am so happy you liked this one especially considering it being one of the earliest. :) Thanks you! your opinion means a lot to me.
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Re: Re. Let's Fly Together
7th Oct 2022 2:26pm
Often those things don't match when I read something. I do think there are those, like yourself, who enjoy a diversity of things however. I have written on many things although I do admit to being very passionate and so often drawn to erotic writing. And writing very explicit is something that excites me, it's more about what's going on in my head and what that does to me. The writing is just a byproduct when I so choose. lol I suppose but yes there is a stigma sometimes. I think some people think it's for attention but that's not why I write explicitly. I do it for me. Anyway, I love that you feel this is worth dozens of comments. Really took me back to a time when I was more reserved and mostly writing about love. And that is a great thing to write about. :) <3
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14th Oct 2022 2:25pm
It's always lovely when someone likes something enough to come back to it. Especially this being one of the first ones actually. I was more focused on trying to make people feel good and had not really shared other things at this point. I was still feeling it out I suppose you would say. Still, I am glad you love the softer side and love as well. Thanks again!