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Out of Reach
Sky lights, but not with hope
Closing one eye, left eye
Stretching arms forward
Reaching nothing, holding nothing
Its so dark, but lights gave sparkles
Still a silent night
With no one in sight
Totally alone, yet it feels.. Alright.
Im used to silence, sadness
And now that made me wonder
Will it be okay when im gone?
Im used to silence —
they are used with my silence
Am i nothing but that nothing..
That i keep on reaching??
Closing one eye, left eye
Stretching arms forward
Reaching nothing, holding nothing
Its so dark, but lights gave sparkles
Still a silent night
With no one in sight
Totally alone, yet it feels.. Alright.
Im used to silence, sadness
And now that made me wonder
Will it be okay when im gone?
Im used to silence —
they are used with my silence
Am i nothing but that nothing..
That i keep on reaching??
Published 9th May 2020
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9th May 2020 11:52pm
Alone in an over crowded world, there but invisible to those around me. I speak but no one listens, I care yet no one does, They command sympathy for their troubles, but indifferent to my own.
I probably misunderstood your poem, yet I feel its about being invisible to everyone around you, wondering if anyone will notice if you stopped being around any more. If this is so, I can wholly sympathise.
XXX
I probably misunderstood your poem, yet I feel its about being invisible to everyone around you, wondering if anyone will notice if you stopped being around any more. If this is so, I can wholly sympathise.
XXX
