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tenshi(short uta)
i conseterd this fallin angel ellagent,
for she had wings that may appear beautiful.
she held herself from lonlyness and disapontment.
this angel is from lost hopes, and brocken dreams.
casting apone your visiouse screams.
but this angel is diffrent, unique in a way,
so fear her not.
she has apeared to be discrete,
and here for another chance at life.
her wings taken away from reason..
but she continues to hold herself,
petrified,bemused, and most of all
she felt as if she were a error to this disition.
this, making her humen once more.
but she..still lay on the ground...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
still disorderly....lost...and beliving in no
faith.
she held herself from lonlyness and disapontment.
this angel is from lost hopes, and brocken dreams.
casting apone your visiouse screams.
for she had wings that may appear beautiful.
she held herself from lonlyness and disapontment.
this angel is from lost hopes, and brocken dreams.
casting apone your visiouse screams.
but this angel is diffrent, unique in a way,
so fear her not.
she has apeared to be discrete,
and here for another chance at life.
her wings taken away from reason..
but she continues to hold herself,
petrified,bemused, and most of all
she felt as if she were a error to this disition.
this, making her humen once more.
but she..still lay on the ground...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
still disorderly....lost...and beliving in no
faith.
she held herself from lonlyness and disapontment.
this angel is from lost hopes, and brocken dreams.
casting apone your visiouse screams.
Written by
AlexnEmoLand
(RevolutionOfAlex)
Published 14th Jan 2012
| Edited 8th Sep 2012
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14th Jan 2012 6:36pm
re: dope!
14th Jan 2012 7:39pm
good job
14th Jan 2012 9:44pm
re: good job
14th Jan 2012 9:57pm
This runs fine, honey
14th Jan 2012 10:03pm
re: This runs fine, honey
14th Jan 2012 10:22pm
tin she
Anonymous
15th Jan 2012 4:26am
a good poem
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Angel
Anonymous
15th Jan 2012 5:55pm
yeah evryones got there own gurdian angel watching over them good job
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Re: tenshi(short uta)
9th Jul 2012 7:26am
This poem is magnificent, honestly. It has such beauty, mystery, and fascination to it, that it capture's the reader's imagination with every line one reads! Your style is quite masterful, I must say. Please share more of your writings with us.
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re: Re: tenshi(short uta)
11th Sep 2012 00:15am
Re: tenshi(short uta)
Anonymous
26th Jan 2013 6:54am
A powerful poem, and I can see well why Mother Jessica likes it so much. My personal favorite lines are these:
"but this angel is diffrent, unique in a way,
so fear her not."
Indeed, this speaks to me deeply! Glorious poem.
"but this angel is diffrent, unique in a way,
so fear her not."
Indeed, this speaks to me deeply! Glorious poem.
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