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Love Tale
A heart meant to love, now broken into pieces. A mouth meant to laugh, now cries for peace. Is this true love? Or a bad dream? Emotions ranging from love to hate. How can something be so sweet turns sour in less than a minute. A Queen looking for King in a world full of liars, manipulators and thieves. Protect your heart sis and throw away the key.
Published 2nd May 2020
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2nd May 2020 5:55am
Good stuff, lady and welcome to DUP,
decent enough offering, couple of small things in the word count, probably insignificant at the end of the day
hope your stay here is a decent experience.
decent enough offering, couple of small things in the word count, probably insignificant at the end of the day
hope your stay here is a decent experience.
2nd May 2020 5:59am
2nd May 2020 6:01am
Good stuff, am hoping you do spoken word too. gotta love the jamaican accent,
2nd May 2020 6:14am
Lol, I'm hear to explore my poetic abilities. You will hear my voice very soon.
2nd May 2020 7:11am
Great poem. You have to find your best friend before you can find your king. Keep on writing.
2nd May 2020 11:35am
2nd May 2020 2:06pm
Very inspiring and uplifting words to describe the feelings of love along with the process of the pain for before you can love someone else you need to love thyself first for you must know your true self value and true self worth..respect dear poetess
2nd May 2020 2:31pm
