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Creamed Greed
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 28th Apr 2020
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
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Re. Creamed Greed
28th Apr 2020 7:25am
Beautiful description of desire literally welling up inside. - 'this fountain of ache wickedly seethes to be gifted only with your atonement' (at word which can be alternatively pronounced ' at-one-ment').
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Re: Re. Creamed Greed
29th Apr 2020 11:29am
Thank you, Solomon, for finding some worth in these words. Especially bringing that detail to my attention, a fabulous one it is!💜
Re. Creamed Greed
29th Apr 2020 2:28pm
Re: Re. Creamed Greed
29th Apr 2020 9:08pm
Omgoooooodness! A Pandy squeal for a returning presence. Welcome back stranger and thank you..
Re. Creamed Greed
Anonymous
29th Apr 2020 2:35pm
The perfect merging...Hunger will have its say.
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29th Apr 2020 9:09pm
Re. Creamed Greed
A heavenly concoction of delectable metaphors that took me into a dream of desire so aching to be fulfilled. Your fountain of ache is one of the most original and brilliant sensual phrases I've come across in my extensive erotica reading. And the monochrome to technicolor transition was put in such a way as to be sexual dynamite. There is a rich flavor to savor here that gives me a high just to read it. You milady are the queen of all things erotica and sensual.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Creamed Greed
I could throw in a kiss on the cheek along with a hug in regards to that latter statement. That humbled me and comforted me since my erotic works are changing on me. I'm beyond thrilled you likes the monochrome to technicolor! On another site, someone else was too and I was afraid many wouldn't understand...Of course you would, just not common references for most is all. Thank you from the bottom of my ever gracious heart for all your words of support and kindness! Xx