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Lullaby for Hazel Eyes..
Flavored like rich candied brine,
his warm rush of liquid ecstasy hit,
inhebriating my senses
far more than any hundred proof tonic
a bartender offered.
Upwards staring to his hazeled gaze,
I called him my whiskey lullaby
as he gently stroked red tendrils
and gave praise,
thanking his darlin' blue eyed babydoll.
As slumber and sweet dreams came
I rested head and heart
upon the stalwart pillars of his altar.
Published 22nd Apr 2020
| Edited 6th Jul 2020
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22nd Apr 2020 2:29pm
22nd Apr 2020 3:44pm
Thanks muchly to new face (for me). Pleasure to meet you on my write.🥂
22nd Apr 2020 2:34pm
You had me at lullaby ... wonderful sensual write ... as only you can do ...
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Anonymous
22nd Apr 2020 3:54pm
You rarely come back without making one helluva entrance. Always happy to see your words upon my screen, blazing pixels into my brain. Gorgeous. Welcome back, lovely little sister :-)
Thank you, sweetpea. I'm not sure about the comeback, but I'll take it..💞
22nd Apr 2020 4:48pm
28th Apr 2020 00:41am
22nd Apr 2020 8:37pm
you still got the sweet loving touch that feeds this mind in words of passion
28th Apr 2020 00:41am
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28th Apr 2020 00:43am
Thanks buddy. I think we returned at the same time. We're misbehaving too much!
24th Apr 2020 4:42am
Oo La La. Such sensuality as you put into golden words of love's soft beauty. This is a masterpiece of sexual energy unleashed for a moment of gentle love. Your words wrapped around my pillar like the warmth of a tropical sea where I long to be. Such a touch is intoxication more hallowed than a thousand shots of whiskey. Sensuality was never more magical than in the art of your words. Deep beautiful adoration for your queen of erotic vision and tenderness.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
John, you humble me so and I appreciate you so much. I had to laugh at you here...
"Your words wrapped around my pillar like the warmth of a tropical sea where I long to be"....that you for finding such worth in my humble words. I can't wait to read you tonight, my sweet friend! Xo
"Your words wrapped around my pillar like the warmth of a tropical sea where I long to be"....that you for finding such worth in my humble words. I can't wait to read you tonight, my sweet friend! Xo
