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Just a journey?
[... Exciting things
and interesting fellows
could help me to overcome
the pain of this journey
into the unknown
that will swallow everything ...]
Someone asks me who I am,
others say they do not know me
then shut off the door
Just as everyone
I can only claim
that I am waiting...
Exciting things
and interesting fellows
could help me to overcome
the pain of this journey
into the unknown
that will swallow everything
So Welcome to this travel
that will bring us into the void
the nowhere trip
Have you brought the phone to share the stream?
The train is moving
but you can throw yourself
on the run
if you dare
No need to close your eyes
the darkness has already reached
and interesting fellows
could help me to overcome
the pain of this journey
into the unknown
that will swallow everything ...]
Someone asks me who I am,
others say they do not know me
then shut off the door
Just as everyone
I can only claim
that I am waiting...
Exciting things
and interesting fellows
could help me to overcome
the pain of this journey
into the unknown
that will swallow everything
So Welcome to this travel
that will bring us into the void
the nowhere trip
Have you brought the phone to share the stream?
The train is moving
but you can throw yourself
on the run
if you dare
No need to close your eyes
the darkness has already reached
Published 12th Jan 2012
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12th Jan 2012 1:33pm
the end is always there, for us to reach; but make the journey there interesting and joyous; through love and laughter. Luca, you are good.
12th Jan 2012 1:42pm
12th Jan 2012 2:36pm
I agree with Grace, the journey is what makes all the difference. We are like the Möbius Continuum
(a continuous loop)never ending, always changing, learning and evolving.Good piece Luca thanks for sharing it.
Gypsy red
(a continuous loop)never ending, always changing, learning and evolving.Good piece Luca thanks for sharing it.
Gypsy red
12th Jan 2012 3:12pm
Your culture extends also in astrophysics. It seems.
You are a treasure to be discovered.
Möbius's universe continuum, It's a fascinating theory. Although I prefer the more dated "Cosmic Egg". In which the universe expands and then reunited. Pulsing like the beating of the heart.
I do not know how much is true. But it's a very poetic image indeed.
Thanks for the comment. Acute as ever.
You are a treasure to be discovered.
Möbius's universe continuum, It's a fascinating theory. Although I prefer the more dated "Cosmic Egg". In which the universe expands and then reunited. Pulsing like the beating of the heart.
I do not know how much is true. But it's a very poetic image indeed.
Thanks for the comment. Acute as ever.
16th Jan 2012 7:23pm
when you write..its like telling a story almost, and u do it very well most ppl do thr poetry in story format but its as if thy dont realy add any maseterious flarr like you do
17th Jan 2012 4:15pm
Tanks Kumyko, for reading and commenting.
But I don't understand what you mean whit: "masterious flarr"
Remember to use the spelling corrector for your English sentences, baby.
But I don't understand what you mean whit: "masterious flarr"
Remember to use the spelling corrector for your English sentences, baby.
17th Feb 2012 3:59am
17th Feb 2012 7:08pm
Could be.
Someone believe in reincarnation.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
You are very kind.
Someone believe in reincarnation.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
You are very kind.
