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petals
you are delicate
and i am, too
we are petals
of the flower
we make
a lovely
little
thing
not fitting
for a spring bouquet
or funeral wreath
but only decorating
this ragged plat
our sanctuary
us,
at home
safe for now
amid all
that thrives
and dies
around us
and i am, too
we are petals
of the flower
we make
a lovely
little
thing
not fitting
for a spring bouquet
or funeral wreath
but only decorating
this ragged plat
our sanctuary
us,
at home
safe for now
amid all
that thrives
and dies
around us
Author's Note
So lucky to have sanctuary in these days of fear and loathing.
Even with illness, our lives are blessed.
Even with illness, our lives are blessed.
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20th Apr 2020 2:21pm
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20th Apr 2020 3:43pm
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20th Apr 2020 6:54pm
Indeed it is. Thanks so much for reading & commenting, Tallen. Much appreciated.
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20th Apr 2020 6:40pm
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20th Apr 2020 7:26pm
Dear J,
How sweet the read. If you have to be confined with someone it’s so much better if you like them. I love the pretty flowers I pictured by your words to create the scene of characters. Lovely way to describe them. Great write. H🌷
How sweet the read. If you have to be confined with someone it’s so much better if you like them. I love the pretty flowers I pictured by your words to create the scene of characters. Lovely way to describe them. Great write. H🌷
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20th Apr 2020 11:41pm
Thanks Honoria for your kind and thoughtful comment. You are much appreciated.