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Yet Still
Its wrong but feels right,
Its love beyond first sight,
It makes one want to write
Songs like Solomon and his impure plight,
It fills the heart with fright,
Pounding with all its might,
Its nocturnal, it should never leave the dead of night,
Or see the break of dawn or a new light ,
But yet still its love,
Wrong or right,
For it we will always fight.
Its love beyond first sight,
It makes one want to write
Songs like Solomon and his impure plight,
It fills the heart with fright,
Pounding with all its might,
Its nocturnal, it should never leave the dead of night,
Or see the break of dawn or a new light ,
But yet still its love,
Wrong or right,
For it we will always fight.
Published 18th Apr 2020
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18th Apr 2020 1:34pm
No good, ever comes from wrong, no matter how good it feels !
Love, oft blossoms in the stark light of day... ❤️
Love, oft blossoms in the stark light of day... ❤️
18th Apr 2020 11:50pm
It this case it depends on who decides what is right or wrong.Like Romeo and Juliet, their love wae wrong but not to them so for it they had to fight.
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18th Apr 2020 11:54pm
Romeo and Juliet started a war; hardly the kind of love that’s built upon the songs of solomon but each to their own.
19th Apr 2020 00:03am
Yeah you make a valid point there... Though right and wrong are too subjective , many a time people who do wrong (especially in love) aren't aware that its wrong, coz how can it be if it brings happeness
19th Apr 2020 00:16am
Happiness, is oft fleeting when at the cost of another's sanity as it isn’t quite right but go ahead, and find your happiness !
When right and wrong are found, and measured, in the same context of love, then something is clearly not right.
Oh. People, are fully cognisant of their behaviours & decisions !
Like, an already married woman, who’s entirely infatuated with her lover from a past encounter pre - marriage is not right, and only bad ju ju will come from that but she and he will both justify their pathetic childish behaviour selfishly to enable them to keep doing the wrong thing.
It’s a karmic thing, which people rarely understand until it’s too late !
When right and wrong are found, and measured, in the same context of love, then something is clearly not right.
Oh. People, are fully cognisant of their behaviours & decisions !
Like, an already married woman, who’s entirely infatuated with her lover from a past encounter pre - marriage is not right, and only bad ju ju will come from that but she and he will both justify their pathetic childish behaviour selfishly to enable them to keep doing the wrong thing.
It’s a karmic thing, which people rarely understand until it’s too late !
19th Apr 2020 00:38am
Human nature is self serving, all decisions made are aimed at one end "happiness" and a person will always gravitate towards that which makes him happy, right and wrong are really social constructs and like all social norms and value ,so long you can justify your actions then right and wrong dont apply.
I hate to play the devils advocate but this kind of thinking has somehow allowed me to cope with disappointment, of which love is full rich with disappointment especially when your right is not your partner's right and u discover that a bit late.
Lol have you never been in such a situation that you continuously do something knowing of the negative consequences of doing such and yet still hope for the best result.,
So though cognisant of their behaviors, they continue with them because they hope theirs will be a different tale, cheater cheat because they hope they wont get caught and because in that moment they are happy and nothing else matter.
Shallow maybe, but i believe when something i do to be happy harms you, it is upon you to leave and find what makes you
I hate to play the devils advocate but this kind of thinking has somehow allowed me to cope with disappointment, of which love is full rich with disappointment especially when your right is not your partner's right and u discover that a bit late.
Lol have you never been in such a situation that you continuously do something knowing of the negative consequences of doing such and yet still hope for the best result.,
So though cognisant of their behaviors, they continue with them because they hope theirs will be a different tale, cheater cheat because they hope they wont get caught and because in that moment they are happy and nothing else matter.
Shallow maybe, but i believe when something i do to be happy harms you, it is upon you to leave and find what makes you
19th Apr 2020 00:44am
Oh. I’ve been there, and learnt the hard way.
Cheaters and liars repeat their cycles, so not too sure how happy endings can ever be forged under such traits.
Enjoy it while you can, and hopefully, you find the happiness you’ve been seeking from the bond !
Who knows, it could be something tragically beautiful; and as they say, nothing worth having is ever easy... ❤️
Cheaters and liars repeat their cycles, so not too sure how happy endings can ever be forged under such traits.
Enjoy it while you can, and hopefully, you find the happiness you’ve been seeking from the bond !
Who knows, it could be something tragically beautiful; and as they say, nothing worth having is ever easy... ❤️
