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Oppugnant
(fifteen of 30 - Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2020)
i think, maybe we all hide
our opposites from one another
all the time
from time to time
time and time again
moreso in a relationship
we plan on staying
together
i think often a certain
amount of forgetfulness
during an egressive
parting of the sees
occurs and an opposite
or 2 is uncovered
discovered
serendipitously out
Yesterday evening
i accidentally came upon
an opposite of Hers --
“ I WILL NEVER. . .! “
Isochronously i felt
delighted
aggrieved
sad
stupefied…
Her appearance
a day before my
discovery of this
opposite
finds me
shaking my head
in affirming my
opening stanza
only it is a
“ this time “
time.
____________________
#NaPoWriMo2020
110 words
76 unique
i think, maybe we all hide
our opposites from one another
all the time
from time to time
time and time again
moreso in a relationship
we plan on staying
together
i think often a certain
amount of forgetfulness
during an egressive
parting of the sees
occurs and an opposite
or 2 is uncovered
discovered
serendipitously out
Yesterday evening
i accidentally came upon
an opposite of Hers --
“ I WILL NEVER. . .! “
Isochronously i felt
delighted
aggrieved
sad
stupefied…
Her appearance
a day before my
discovery of this
opposite
finds me
shaking my head
in affirming my
opening stanza
only it is a
“ this time “
time.
____________________
#NaPoWriMo2020
110 words
76 unique
Published 15th Apr 2020
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15th Apr 2020 1:50pm
Like the way you structured this ... it flows wonderfully ... bravo Tallen ... half way there ...
15th Apr 2020 1:57pm
thank You
appreciate Your read
i was just thinking about us being
at the midway pointe when i woke up this morning!
; )
appreciate Your read
i was just thinking about us being
at the midway pointe when i woke up this morning!
; )
15th Apr 2020 2:25pm
Day 15. Half way there. Good for you.
Beautifully written. Especially like
"i accidentally came upon
an opposite of Hers --
“ I WILL NEVER. . .! “
Isochronously i felt
delighted
aggrieved
sad
stupefied…"
Nothing like finding stuff left behind especially opposite of thought what was.
Beautifully written. Especially like
"i accidentally came upon
an opposite of Hers --
“ I WILL NEVER. . .! “
Isochronously i felt
delighted
aggrieved
sad
stupefied…"
Nothing like finding stuff left behind especially opposite of thought what was.
15th Apr 2020 3:28pm
Happens all the time (to me)
i just write about it cryptic like
and then my mind can let it go.
Yup -- only 15 more pieces of shshshshsh......
...puddles of ink to spill
i just write about it cryptic like
and then my mind can let it go.
Yup -- only 15 more pieces of shshshshsh......
...puddles of ink to spill
15th Apr 2020 5:05pm
or 2 is uncovered
discovered
serendipitously out
Oh when no hierarchy of good intent. ..
I lament it
Praise it
This time....but next
Your verbage (said ver bawshj)
Feels fancy (in decadent yummy way)
Yet unverbose
A fine trick of tip tapping keys with grin and honesty brother. Well done.
She Googled 1
Her brain 7
Jens count for fun words tallen uses
Today
tomorrow?
Bring em on darlin
discovered
serendipitously out
Oh when no hierarchy of good intent. ..
I lament it
Praise it
This time....but next
Your verbage (said ver bawshj)
Feels fancy (in decadent yummy way)
Yet unverbose
A fine trick of tip tapping keys with grin and honesty brother. Well done.
She Googled 1
Her brain 7
Jens count for fun words tallen uses
Today
tomorrow?
Bring em on darlin
15th Apr 2020 6:21pm
LOL -- i remember last years NaPo
people were telling me that i was teaching
them all kinds of new words to add to their
vocabulary.
Always delighted to know when a reader has to look up words.
IRL, once i used the word, lament in everyday speech and a mgr at my job said, "WHO TALKS LIKE THAT?"
Funny when i look back on incidents like that.
i truly appreciate the wonderful comments made here.
thank You
people were telling me that i was teaching
them all kinds of new words to add to their
vocabulary.
Always delighted to know when a reader has to look up words.
IRL, once i used the word, lament in everyday speech and a mgr at my job said, "WHO TALKS LIKE THAT?"
Funny when i look back on incidents like that.
i truly appreciate the wonderful comments made here.
thank You
15th Apr 2020 7:18pm
15th Apr 2020 8:59pm
Sometimes i scribe cryptic
on purpose
as i feel this is kind and so only the one or ones
the ink is intended for will decipher.
But at the same time i want readers who know nothing of the true meaning to glean something from the spill.
i believe i have succeeded if only one (You) has fallen into my net of learning..........
appreciate Your read and share
on purpose
as i feel this is kind and so only the one or ones
the ink is intended for will decipher.
But at the same time i want readers who know nothing of the true meaning to glean something from the spill.
i believe i have succeeded if only one (You) has fallen into my net of learning..........
appreciate Your read and share
Anonymous
16th Apr 2020 2:01pm
"parting of the sees" I hit that line and my whole face lit up! It's the mysteries that keep things fresh and those unexpected discoveries can occur even when we're not intentionally trying to mask anything. Facets simply don't all show at any given point in time. It's the nature of dimensional things/beings. Sometimes it's a delight...sometimes not so much. Much enjoyed, Tallen. Past the halfway mark now...may the downslope be easier than the climb up! I'm feeling that myself with my own personal challenge...
16th Apr 2020 4:33pm
DeeeeeeeeeLIGHTED
You made mention of that line!
i chose to italic the words -- sees -- as opposed
to bold because i wanted to hint at it.
thank You for the thoughtful wonderful
comments
You made mention of that line!
i chose to italic the words -- sees -- as opposed
to bold because i wanted to hint at it.
thank You for the thoughtful wonderful
comments
