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I SAW MY SADNESS

My sadness
it touched me
through blowing leaves
in a gaze.
     
My sadness
it took me
back though time
in the haze.
    
My sadness
I saw it
as I looked
to the sky.
    
The sadness
of a little girl
who’s Daddy
just died.
    
My sadness
consumed me
until I couldn’t move
    
My Sadness
releasing itself
through my mood.
    
So I smiled though
my sadness,
the reflection soon showed
    
My sadness
is lessened with
each letting go.

Morganpoet
Written by Morganpoet
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Author's Note
Eight days after writing "MY SADNESS" I had a flashback to myself looking up to the sky on the day my father died, twenty five years earlier and wrote this poem.
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