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The Cliff
The sea wind blows against her face as she makes her way down the cliff path.
She walks slowly, holding onto the railing by the drop, wondering if she ought to abandon her journey to the capital before she slips and falls.
But she continues, ignoring the rising disquiet urging her to turn back.
She walks slowly, holding onto the railing by the drop, wondering if she ought to abandon her journey to the capital before she slips and falls.
But she continues, ignoring the rising disquiet urging her to turn back.
Published 13th Apr 2020
Author's Note
Based on a previous novel attempt. Genre: psychological thriller. Setting: Dorset, UK.
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14th Apr 2020 00:18am
Leaves you wondering what happens next... wonderful imagery and nice story-telling ;)
I've always liked your writing, Lozzamus - keep up the excellent work!
I've always liked your writing, Lozzamus - keep up the excellent work!
14th Apr 2020 9:56pm
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14th Apr 2020 1:41am
Dear L,
When I first read it I thought, she’s forging on braving the elements of being alone and falling without benefit of help. Getting to the last stanza “But she continues, ignoring the rising disquiet urging her to turn back.“
Aaaahhhhhh! Total nail biter with a bit of protective fetal position, hands covering eyes position waiting for whatever lurks at the bottom to appear...love the thrill. H🌷
When I first read it I thought, she’s forging on braving the elements of being alone and falling without benefit of help. Getting to the last stanza “But she continues, ignoring the rising disquiet urging her to turn back.“
Aaaahhhhhh! Total nail biter with a bit of protective fetal position, hands covering eyes position waiting for whatever lurks at the bottom to appear...love the thrill. H🌷
14th Apr 2020 10:14pm
Thanks, Honoria. The issue's not so much what might be waiting at the bottom. More, a general merge of paranoia, unwanted interest, a recent crisis, and a childhood trauma. The cliff walk acts as a symbol of her growing isolation from society.
14th Apr 2020 2:35am
14th Apr 2020 10:17pm
Many thanks, buddhakitty. I hope you are keeping well in the current worldwide situation.
15th Apr 2020 2:51am
Keeping well to the best of my ability. Stay safe my poetic friend,
hugs,
buddhakitty .
hugs,
buddhakitty .
