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The Stance
She faces north
he's towards the south.
They will never see eye to eye.
he's towards the south.
They will never see eye to eye.
Published 12th Apr 2020
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12th Apr 2020 8:51pm
12th Apr 2020 11:08pm
Love is the art of the possible ... Where you start doesn't matter, how far you go together is key ... But had it go both ways ... Best to date and worst ... Good write, bless and love ... ..
13th Apr 2020 00:58am
Dear N,
Well that is a pickle if ever I read one. The earth’s fissure certainly won’t help the situation will it? Relationships are delicate at the best of times let alone when there are obstacles. How well this write I understand. May this be observational for you and not personal. This is a wonderfully insightful look at the polar opposites a couple can find themselves. Excellent. H🌷
Well that is a pickle if ever I read one. The earth’s fissure certainly won’t help the situation will it? Relationships are delicate at the best of times let alone when there are obstacles. How well this write I understand. May this be observational for you and not personal. This is a wonderfully insightful look at the polar opposites a couple can find themselves. Excellent. H🌷
13th Apr 2020 10:00pm
Nice ... crisp ... poignant ... raises more questions than it answers ...
14th Apr 2020 2:24am
