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You are amazing
Your stubbornness makes you cute.
The little smile you have when you frown. Knowing very well that you are wrong but you softly harden your heart not to give up on your opinion. you are acting up in a hidden love expression.
Even if you turn your back pretending not to listen to me the louder I can hear your heart beat saying *I love you*
Your stubbornness makes you cute. you can't hold the frown for long because your pretty heart is laughing in love.
Your stubbornness gig up our relationship.
Just act up.
In just a low level English,
I wish I can describe that bad part of you because that is what make you special. The casual part of life, the bad girl you are at night and the innocent lady you become in the day make you interesting.
you are such a beautiful bad black skin girl who can seduce anyone quickly without anyone know it. you are not clear in your approach or attack in short you are unpredictable. You believe too much in yourself you think you can conquer anything you want.
Yes you conquered me.
The little smile you have when you frown. Knowing very well that you are wrong but you softly harden your heart not to give up on your opinion. you are acting up in a hidden love expression.
Even if you turn your back pretending not to listen to me the louder I can hear your heart beat saying *I love you*
Your stubbornness makes you cute. you can't hold the frown for long because your pretty heart is laughing in love.
Your stubbornness gig up our relationship.
Just act up.
In just a low level English,
I wish I can describe that bad part of you because that is what make you special. The casual part of life, the bad girl you are at night and the innocent lady you become in the day make you interesting.
you are such a beautiful bad black skin girl who can seduce anyone quickly without anyone know it. you are not clear in your approach or attack in short you are unpredictable. You believe too much in yourself you think you can conquer anything you want.
Yes you conquered me.
Published 12th Apr 2020
| Edited 1st Aug 2023
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10th Jun 2020 4:06pm
This reminds me of someone so close to my heart with the same vibe. Loved it master! Very well.
Just a friendly feedback that try taking an effort to change your u into you.
I am not offending but it would surely gain your art more recognition when you bring these small changes because you have got skills to give words to an emotion and even a rhyme pattern.
Kudos.
Just a friendly feedback that try taking an effort to change your u into you.
I am not offending but it would surely gain your art more recognition when you bring these small changes because you have got skills to give words to an emotion and even a rhyme pattern.
Kudos.
