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Eggs in moonshine
(ten of 30 - Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2020)
i’m pretty certain
it’s only a dream
solely a scene
wholly a mean
to an end
hopefully not
mine,
however, if so,
it’s liberty
for me.
Am I living a life
that is mine
or an illusion
lorded over me
a municipal
guise just to
keep me in
line?
Crack more
cracked up
& beat me
into a silly
concoction
pepper me
to sleep
so i might
wake
baked.
___________________
#NaPoWriMo2020
69 words
53 unique
i’m pretty certain
it’s only a dream
solely a scene
wholly a mean
to an end
hopefully not
mine,
however, if so,
it’s liberty
for me.
Am I living a life
that is mine
or an illusion
lorded over me
a municipal
guise just to
keep me in
line?
Crack more
cracked up
& beat me
into a silly
concoction
pepper me
to sleep
so i might
wake
baked.
___________________
#NaPoWriMo2020
69 words
53 unique
Published 10th Apr 2020
Author's Note
Runnin' on empty (Can You tell?) -- LOL
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10th Apr 2020 8:13pm
LOL! I thought this was actually going to be about eggs and moonshine for breakfast!
10th Apr 2020 8:30pm
Fooled You -- lol
i went with the -- Pie-in-the-sky -- or loosely close to it meaning
i went with the -- Pie-in-the-sky -- or loosely close to it meaning
10th Apr 2020 8:33pm
10th Apr 2020 10:18pm
i had no idea........
i grew up dirt poor on Oahu in the 1960's
we had our own version of this type of
Breakfast
i grew up dirt poor on Oahu in the 1960's
we had our own version of this type of
Breakfast
10th Apr 2020 9:48pm
10th Apr 2020 10:22pm
if i caused You to @ least smile (laugh without making a big deal about it aloud)
then perhaps this spill was not just to fill a
slot for this April challenge
appreciate You, Beautiful Sister
then perhaps this spill was not just to fill a
slot for this April challenge
appreciate You, Beautiful Sister
10th Apr 2020 10:10pm
Very punny/runny and a tad bit salty...I'll take mine sunny side up all day...good work T
10th Apr 2020 10:20pm
You, Brother
never disappoint to cause me to chuckle
with Your catch of my minute puns
inserted here
thank You for causing me to Grin
never disappoint to cause me to chuckle
with Your catch of my minute puns
inserted here
thank You for causing me to Grin
Anonymous
11th Apr 2020 8:57pm
Sometimes when we're "running on empty," some of the most interesting things spring forth. Much enjoyed :-)
11th Apr 2020 9:27pm
Yes......sometimes -- not for me i think
i get silly and punny
Happy You enjoyed, this, though
i get silly and punny
Happy You enjoyed, this, though
