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SOME'MAZIN GRACES CAN PASS YE BY JUST for SOME DOPEY KID SAYING NO TO A CALLING

byDKzk.onTueJanuary10,2012at12:31pm

"A"LIST of A'MAZING STUFF

again wee come t'that overused amazing

word amazing as it is that isn't it amazing how

how easy how quickly

The Big Day

The Next Big Thing

Thee Big-As-Life ItSelf

can [dis]appear like swept'way in

one'swell'foop � [of]

Fate (&wee wee wee don'tevenknow

what this fckn fate-thing is, gdamnit! !ha!)

an amazin race to a'chieve that

Amazing Grace, thee stuffings of precious legend,

seeing Light, a'might blind-struck, dumb-struck,& all

them bumfucked assholes in collared Father's backroom

sacristy

sacraments, holey passage rites, behind thee altar, right behind,

wh'ere wee could open the gates'o our heaven-tight poopchutes

to recieve Christ's private �Love via his gentle blackrobed rep

presentative h'ere here here On Earth..............

all thee whining traumas be put aside away as fantasy'o what

coulda been my wholly holy comm-union...t'which me 8yr'old mind& shy mouth

refused ( just said No, long'fore it were besloganized )

induction into Altar Boy Training, much to Sister Benigna's chagrin

(as thee quietest

little bastard in all of OLC near scandalized his'self)

so littledanny missed thee holy boat tha'slides thru th'tiny

C'anal of Love flowin in2 thee

Eternal eXpanses of Heaven..........

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � .canno cry bout what mighta been,

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � heavenly or not /

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �&, to be fair, It

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � may never've cum

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � to anyone there in that

� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � place & time.

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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX

(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

Published 10th Jan 2012

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Mazing

braggman (Steve Bragg)

11th Jan 2012 2:19am

I'm liking the amazing race for the amazing grace. Benigna's chagrin is also a hidden little piece of poetry on its own when is read out-loud. The aside sentence about fucking fate seems too much aside. Then it gets two exploding words that stop us dead before you start up again. Not that I have any objection to the fuck in the sentence, it just seems too long a wander off yr point, and although yr going there, yr also going somewhere else more important. In all... brave, exploratory... in more ways than one... Good stuff.