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This love
has no love.
A twisted illusion
to a down right lie.
A contagious kiss
lead to an everlasting disease.
Eating away at the tissues and muscles that held it all together.
This love has no love
unless this is how love is meant to be
If it is true,
kill me now.
has no love.
A twisted illusion
to a down right lie.
A contagious kiss
lead to an everlasting disease.
Eating away at the tissues and muscles that held it all together.
This love has no love
unless this is how love is meant to be
If it is true,
kill me now.
Published 10th Jan 2012
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10th Jan 2012 5:54pm
a wonderful little poem full of brevity, power, and a great metaphor. The second stanza blew me away. One thing though, take out the last two lines. Donīt let the reader to get off that easily, and "This love has no love/unless this is how love is meant to be" sums up it perfectly
11th Jan 2012 1:35am
i love the bitterness and darkness...a completely different perspective on love
24th Jan 2012 3:15pm
fallin for the wrong person
is simply a diverson
to solidify satans cohersion
because he wants you to think Love worsens
or that it is simply all about squirtin
when the fact of the matter is that Love Is God & we need to start rehursing....;)
is simply a diverson
to solidify satans cohersion
because he wants you to think Love worsens
or that it is simply all about squirtin
when the fact of the matter is that Love Is God & we need to start rehursing....;)
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12th May 2012 10:55am
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