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Out Of Sight
Published 26th Mar 2020
Author's Note
Just seeing a date's eyes swivel away from me to a blonde woman on a dance floor three weeks back before we were all locked down... it started nice, but I got angry as I wrote it - forgive the harsh tone...
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26th Mar 2020 10:48am
26th Mar 2020 11:50am
There is nothing to forgive one he was out of order forget about you can look but don't touch his attention should of been on you and nowhere else this is raw and uncut truth on how he made you feel don't be sorry for someone's else actions...respect dear poetess
2nd Apr 2020 3:48am
Love your ferocious side here. There is something about female aggression that turns me on. You do it superbly here.
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John
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John
6th Apr 2020 10:44pm
