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Beyond
Poetry, craft God gave
I call on thee, not as person
but organelle of the great Mind
I'm digging into myself
afraid there are no cures
no answers
for what ails me
Read this, knowing
as you join me
that in some things
we find ourselves
alone
I call on thee, not as person
but organelle of the great Mind
I'm digging into myself
afraid there are no cures
no answers
for what ails me
Read this, knowing
as you join me
that in some things
we find ourselves
alone
Published 24th Mar 2020
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24th Mar 2020 2:02pm
Love everything about this ... the structure ... the simplicity ... the flow ... the cadence ... a plump juicy word like "organelle" ... also the closing two line stanza ... which stands alone ...
24th Mar 2020 2:31pm
24th Mar 2020 3:45pm
Poetry never abandons us; and will always be waiting when we decide to pick the pen back up.
24th Mar 2020 3:51pm
24th Mar 2020 4:07pm
24th Mar 2020 4:43pm
I beg to differ, poetess...
Poetry /can/, and you must be ready to listen. I learned that when I was a novice pen-pusher.., the lesson has yet to let me down.
🐯
🙏🏻
Poetry /can/, and you must be ready to listen. I learned that when I was a novice pen-pusher.., the lesson has yet to let me down.
🐯
🙏🏻
24th Mar 2020 8:56pm
Poetry is always there for us even if the words don't want to come out. We are all a community of poets here at the DUP. Keep on writing.
25th Mar 2020 1:55pm
25th Mar 2020 8:08pm
Hi Jess,
Your poem title has been included in my tribute poem honouring DUP poets:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/377602-deep-underground/
(miles to go before I sleep)😚
Your poem title has been included in my tribute poem honouring DUP poets:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/377602-deep-underground/
(miles to go before I sleep)😚
25th Mar 2020 8:51pm
