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Real Man
but please
break my heart
again
then sew me
right back
too bad you're
not
good enough
to have me
whole.
Ana Schwarz
break my heart
again
then sew me
right back
too bad you're
not
good enough
to have me
whole.
Ana Schwarz
Published 24th Mar 2020
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24th Mar 2020 4:04pm
Dear A,
Very nice sewing here. I very much like the image this conjured up for me, almost a sarcastic voice to the putz that keeps coming back and stealing a little bit more of the heroine every time the needle is finished mending. Wonderully written. I very much appreciate your format and brevity. You say a lot with very precise wording. H🌷
Very nice sewing here. I very much like the image this conjured up for me, almost a sarcastic voice to the putz that keeps coming back and stealing a little bit more of the heroine every time the needle is finished mending. Wonderully written. I very much appreciate your format and brevity. You say a lot with very precise wording. H🌷
24th Mar 2020 6:06pm
wow thank you so much, you really understood what I wanted to say between the lines. This means a lot ♥
24th Mar 2020 8:46pm
I am sorry this person broke youd heart in half. Writing this poem does help. Keep on writing.
