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life
Early investigation
within
the parameters
of our nation
would have brought
a realisation
of a life
that should have been
within
the parameters
of our nation
would have brought
a realisation
of a life
that should have been
Published 9th Jan 2012
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Anonymous
15th Mar 2014 10:08am
A very thoughtful piece. Short and effective with a nice subtle rhyme scheme. I also like how it doesn't end with a full stop. You are left wondering about the answer to the question posed.
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
16th Mar 2014 9:48am
