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Cold Shiver
Wake up
Watch the world burn
Keep your distance
For the enemy is within
Trying to get out
Fear is a cold shiver
As the sliver of sanity
Finally slips away
Panic
Is the order of the day
Feel the sting
The shit show has begun
Hell is seeping through
Slyness of
Flesh and bone
Humanity
Is passing by
The real animal
Is showing
As halos choke the mask
Common sense
Can’t be heard over
The noise of confusion
There’s no limit
To the breakdown
Watch the world burn
Keep your distance
For the enemy is within
Trying to get out
Fear is a cold shiver
As the sliver of sanity
Finally slips away
Panic
Is the order of the day
Feel the sting
The shit show has begun
Hell is seeping through
Slyness of
Flesh and bone
Humanity
Is passing by
The real animal
Is showing
As halos choke the mask
Common sense
Can’t be heard over
The noise of confusion
There’s no limit
To the breakdown
Published 20th Mar 2020
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20th Mar 2020 11:06am
You really captured the anxiety in this! I know it seems hopeless, AP! But hang in there! This too shall pass.
20th Mar 2020 11:40am
21st Mar 2020 4:36am
I feel this way about the world right now, with it's 'shoulder bumps' for hellos, now everyone knows how poets feel, now that's scary :)
21st Mar 2020 4:45am
Your right Anxiety was the only theme I could think of as being appropriate
Anonymous
24th Mar 2020 6:46pm
I really like this. Captures how fragile society actually is in the midst of a real threat. And yet humanity pretends to be all powerful on most days.
16th Aug 2020 3:27pm
23rd Jan 2021 3:11pm
You're prescience was spot on, as this feeling is now our "normal".....
Terrific write, C
🌹
xo
Terrific write, C
🌹
xo
