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You
Your distance is maddening
your mystery, compels me
to hunger
With brevity you tease me
, with what I cannot
have.
You sparked the flame that
smolders within your words
are tight
As they fall from your mind
then smoothly drop into mine
My thoughts surround
someone I see
Although
I see no one at all
your mystery, compels me
to hunger
With brevity you tease me
, with what I cannot
have.
You sparked the flame that
smolders within your words
are tight
As they fall from your mind
then smoothly drop into mine
My thoughts surround
someone I see
Although
I see no one at all
Published 18th Mar 2020
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18th Mar 2020 10:53am
18th Mar 2020 11:08am
The feel of a need and want yet so far yet not completely close till they become invisible..nicely composed dear poetess
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Sep 2022 4:45am
18th Mar 2020 1:59pm
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18th Mar 2020 6:35pm
"Though I see no one at all"
Powerful closing, to be sure.
The power of words is incredible. Sadly, sometimes we can fall in love with a verbally painted picture of a ghost if it seems an answer to a prayer
Powerful closing, to be sure.
The power of words is incredible. Sadly, sometimes we can fall in love with a verbally painted picture of a ghost if it seems an answer to a prayer
18th Mar 2020 8:05pm
19th Mar 2020 00:53am
Great poem. I wish I was there with you so you can read those nice words to me, Lol. Keep on writing.
19th Mar 2020 7:58pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
20th Mar 2020 7:49pm
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25th Mar 2020 10:32am
