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What Slows You Down?
There he goes
all alone,
down the road,
he walks very slow,
a heavy heart
weighs him down
we cant see the part
that makes him slow
as he goes, down the road,
we assume home,
but then again, who knows.
all alone,
down the road,
he walks very slow,
a heavy heart
weighs him down
we cant see the part
that makes him slow
as he goes, down the road,
we assume home,
but then again, who knows.
Published 14th Mar 2020
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14th Mar 2020 00:50am
14th Mar 2020 1:13am
Makes one think, this one. It's stark & leaves many questions as to this man's life.
Reminds me of a poem I wrote with Medinda called, "Dead End Lines."
'The path may be straight but it sure ain't pretty!'
(This is how I described my collab. See the parallels? God, I'm on form tonight, huh? ;-) )
Reminds me of a poem I wrote with Medinda called, "Dead End Lines."
'The path may be straight but it sure ain't pretty!'
(This is how I described my collab. See the parallels? God, I'm on form tonight, huh? ;-) )
Lol send me the link to the poem.
its the end of the world. Fuck it, roll with it😂
its the end of the world. Fuck it, roll with it😂
14th Mar 2020 1:17am
Lol. Donald Trump said, 'Don't panic.' I guess that means panic!
Ok..will do.
Ok..will do.
14th Mar 2020 1:18am
14th Mar 2020 4:33am
