deepundergroundpoetry.com
Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
Ahavati means "my love"
She is the most loving
woman I have met here
which is saying a whole lot
Hopefully everyone here
already realizes this
Ahavati is most precious
of course, ingrates must exist
but let not any question me
I'm as grateful as can be
for precious Ahavati
I apologize for setting you
apart, but that's been done
already, as my own eyes saw...
To one Isreal-mother I was won
She's Abe's daughter to a flaw!
And I am just another poet
who's affection and respect
means we must show it
..to our dear angel, Ahavati
She is the most loving
woman I have met here
which is saying a whole lot
Hopefully everyone here
already realizes this
Ahavati is most precious
of course, ingrates must exist
but let not any question me
I'm as grateful as can be
for precious Ahavati
I apologize for setting you
apart, but that's been done
already, as my own eyes saw...
To one Isreal-mother I was won
She's Abe's daughter to a flaw!
And I am just another poet
who's affection and respect
means we must show it
..to our dear angel, Ahavati
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 12
reading list entries 1
comments 21
reads 707
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 3:30am
I love this poem and I hope Avati loves too. Keep on writing. You are both making me mushy.
2
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 4:50am
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 2:22pm
Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 3:54am
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 4:49am
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 2:55pm
Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
Anonymous
8th Mar 2020 4:23am
Hey EW.......outstanding tribute to a soul that makes a difference in every life path that crosses hers.......you do as well in the power of your inks......along with you notice luv for others......this is so graceful.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
2
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
❤️Well, this is my fav part, where everybody else shows they, too, know I'm right, making this a multi-tribute!!❤️
I luv U! Sweet poetess! 💜💜💜💜💜
🙏😎
I luv U! Sweet poetess! 💜💜💜💜💜
🙏😎
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 2:23pm
Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 6:57am
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 2:22pm
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 9:12pm
Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
Aww, thank you, Jess. This was as sweet as it was lovely. You humble me. I am truly grateful we have met, and that you consider me a friend. xo
1
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
8th Mar 2020 9:10pm
It's only 10 likes on this poem now... but we will turn around and it will be 20. People here love you.
Not everyone, but ALL the smart ones. Your many virtues are all to visible; especially your loving kindness, generously governed by good, wise honesty.
And nobody here writes like you! 💖✌️😎💖
Not everyone, but ALL the smart ones. Your many virtues are all to visible; especially your loving kindness, generously governed by good, wise honesty.
And nobody here writes like you! 💖✌️😎💖
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
9th Mar 2020 1:40am
Great vid, Jess! I always love the hear the children in the background. And thank you for such kind words. They truly are appreciated. 💖
1
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
9th Mar 2020 3:21am
I think it's one of those times your friends should be standing with you. So, pardon me for the attention I'm showering on you and your supporting friends, but I can see that... this is a demanding time! For multiple reasons. The last thing we need is for you to feel alone. Or your Johnny and friends. This season is a big undertaking with many pitfalls ahead. I see a lot of workers, many of whom I don't really know...
...unlike you! You have been very kind to get to know me and show such care as you have!
💖So rest well.💖
...unlike you! You have been very kind to get to know me and show such care as you have!
💖So rest well.💖
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
9th Mar 2020 10:16pm
Thank you, Jess; I can ASSURE you we feel anything but alone! We have a KICKASS team shouldering their part of the workload—we good! I guarantee you that!
Thank you! 💖
Thank you! 💖
1
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
As a mother of ten, I know it matters where each loyalty lay. How would I know if it wasn't collective ingratitude pushing against HCC? Now you are into something bigger. You deserve PUBLIC support from everyone who believes you deserve it, including me.
I'd appreciate people openly recognizing and supporting each other... even if not exactly you in the hot seat! ( I'm fond of picking on you, aren't I?)😇💖
I'm mighty glad for the WHOLE team! ✌️😎
👏👏👏👏👏
I'd appreciate people openly recognizing and supporting each other... even if not exactly you in the hot seat! ( I'm fond of picking on you, aren't I?)😇💖
I'm mighty glad for the WHOLE team! ✌️😎
👏👏👏👏👏
Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
Anonymous
9th Mar 2020 12:50pm
Thank you for this, Edible. You are right. No one writes like Ahavati. And her actions are always primed with love. I certainly would not be the man and poet I am today without her.
1
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
9th Mar 2020 2:34pm
That was so nice, I wish you had said it 20 hours ago. 😝
It's ok, Phantom came through....
It's ok, Phantom came through....
Re: Re. Let Me Never be Ungrateful (for Ahavati)
9th Mar 2020 7:25pm
I'm sorry, what I should have meant to say was...
I mean...
Thank you! I'm going to make a new video... (self taught!! iPad magic!) with your nice words about her in it.... it will be even better, so her number #1 fan, you, are responsible for a nicer video.
And all you had to do was procrastinate! ✌️😝
I mean...
Thank you! I'm going to make a new video... (self taught!! iPad magic!) with your nice words about her in it.... it will be even better, so her number #1 fan, you, are responsible for a nicer video.
And all you had to do was procrastinate! ✌️😝