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Up and Down
The children sit on the seesaw in the park.
Each on one side
Hot, humid day
Up
Down
Angry
Sad
Smiling
That’s the way this feels being with you right now
Up
Down
As your anger gets the best of you
It weighs me down
This seesaw is stuck midway
Each on one side
Hot, humid day
Up
Down
Angry
Sad
Smiling
That’s the way this feels being with you right now
Up
Down
As your anger gets the best of you
It weighs me down
This seesaw is stuck midway
Published 27th Feb 2020
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27th Feb 2020 12:44pm
Dear N,
Incredible metaphor for a relationship that can be emotionally unstable and I am very sorry you might know this. So unsettling and you have captured that using the see saw motion. Excellent write and best wishes you have a positive outcome in the relationship. H🌷
Incredible metaphor for a relationship that can be emotionally unstable and I am very sorry you might know this. So unsettling and you have captured that using the see saw motion. Excellent write and best wishes you have a positive outcome in the relationship. H🌷
29th Feb 2020 00:15am
