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The Effigy Of Love
This longing
Is endless
A seed
That has slowly grown
In my soul
Her beauty
inscribed
Upon alabaster skin
Seamless
As infinity
The effigy of love
A lit candle
Its flickering flame
Slow burning
In my heart
My senses
In her flow
The wildness of rapids
Dangerous
Exhilarating
To imagine
The currents
Depths
Mysteries
Of her ocean
Published 23rd Feb 2020
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23rd Feb 2020 9:23am
23rd Feb 2020 1:41pm
23rd Feb 2020 2:26pm
This is great, AP. That ending is perfect.
One thing:
It’s flickering flame
Its is already possessive; therefore, you don't need the apostrophe.
One thing:
It’s flickering flame
Its is already possessive; therefore, you don't need the apostrophe.
23rd Feb 2020 2:39pm
23rd Feb 2020 2:39pm
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23rd Feb 2020 2:42pm
23rd Feb 2020 4:40pm
We will see how long this holds up. Just happy with the way the are coming on the page lately
23rd Feb 2020 11:06pm
