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Black Rose
Voiceless words caress my ear
My spirit cries out a wolf’s howl
Every doubt seems to disappear
I’ve become the huntress on the prowl.
You can’t take your eyes off me
One look from me, and I can see you shiver
Surely this moment must have been destiny.
I hold my breath as you whisper…
Black rose… my beautiful black rose
Will you still be here when I wake up?
To be with you, I’d willingly drink from death’s cup
Oh, sweet black rose.
The midnight sun bears witness to our love
We’re are each other’s twin flame
We declare our bond to the heavens above
I close my eyes as you call my name.
Black rose… my beautiful black rose
Please don’t ever leave my side
I humbly ask for you to become my bride
Oh, sweet black rose.
My spirit cries out a wolf’s howl
Every doubt seems to disappear
I’ve become the huntress on the prowl.
You can’t take your eyes off me
One look from me, and I can see you shiver
Surely this moment must have been destiny.
I hold my breath as you whisper…
Black rose… my beautiful black rose
Will you still be here when I wake up?
To be with you, I’d willingly drink from death’s cup
Oh, sweet black rose.
The midnight sun bears witness to our love
We’re are each other’s twin flame
We declare our bond to the heavens above
I close my eyes as you call my name.
Black rose… my beautiful black rose
Please don’t ever leave my side
I humbly ask for you to become my bride
Oh, sweet black rose.
Published 23rd Feb 2020
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23rd Feb 2020 2:09am
23rd Feb 2020 2:16am
Great to see you , Lunas Child ;
So , here we are again , and Blackwolf carries his sack of knowledge ;
In ancient tradition , and the Old Wietch's Language ;
Black = 73
Rose = 530
Black Rose = 603
Which is the sum of eight symbols , which compose
our "Mother / Goddess" column , and fit together ,
make the skeletal or muscular system of the human
body , yet as well , equal by number value , "Sphinx" ,
or , "Awareness"...
So a "Black Rose" can symbolize all those things , and far ,
far , more...a black rose given , or placed , is a most definite
message , in our old ( Ancient ) tradition...
As well , "Piercing Whisper" equals the same number...
So , of course , well written...
Secondly...just letting you know , you "tapped in"...;)
So , here we are again , and Blackwolf carries his sack of knowledge ;
In ancient tradition , and the Old Wietch's Language ;
Black = 73
Rose = 530
Black Rose = 603
Which is the sum of eight symbols , which compose
our "Mother / Goddess" column , and fit together ,
make the skeletal or muscular system of the human
body , yet as well , equal by number value , "Sphinx" ,
or , "Awareness"...
So a "Black Rose" can symbolize all those things , and far ,
far , more...a black rose given , or placed , is a most definite
message , in our old ( Ancient ) tradition...
As well , "Piercing Whisper" equals the same number...
So , of course , well written...
Secondly...just letting you know , you "tapped in"...;)
23rd Feb 2020 3:11am
Good to hear from you again, Blackwolf. It's been a while. Thanks for your input.
23rd Feb 2020 4:48am
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3rd Mar 2020 10:03pm
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5th Mar 2020 9:11pm
It could be set in any time period, I find. I didn't have vampires in mind when I wrote this poem, but I suppose the theme could fit.
Thanks for your comment.
Thanks for your comment.
17th Mar 2020 2:43am
This is beautiful. So well put and passionate. I love the use of black rose. Loved it!
17th Mar 2020 2:46am
17th Mar 2020 2:50am
You are welcome. I enjoy your work. You have a soft touch that draws me in completely.
17th Mar 2020 2:51am
Eh, it depends on my mood. Lately, my work has been considerably darker than what I've first published here.
Either way, thank you.
Either way, thank you.
17th Mar 2020 2:53am
17th Mar 2020 2:59am
Oh boy. I have plenty, but it's up to you to decide what draws your interest in more. Here's a list from the first 3 pages:
-Ashes
-Locked In
-Stitch Me Up
-Shattered Glass
-Words Hurt
-Does It Matter
-The Silver Lining
-Survivor
-Underskin
-Last Christmas
-Ashes
-Locked In
-Stitch Me Up
-Shattered Glass
-Words Hurt
-Does It Matter
-The Silver Lining
-Survivor
-Underskin
-Last Christmas
28th May 2021 1:04pm
Whether she knows or not
But here's hoping that she never changes
Other than continuing to exude her glorious scent
But here's hoping that she never changes
Other than continuing to exude her glorious scent
1st Jan 2023 2:50pm
A flower can be preserved in its eternal glory. Thank you for your comment, Laluma.
