Recommendations

I have a few things I can recommend in private xx

good material for a future poem perhaps?

so naughty yet so nice hummm...respect dear poetess

it's as good a mix as any, I suppose

another deliciously titillating poetic morsel..yum....

I am glad you found the reading to your taste

Another captivating exploration of a particular dynamic.  

"Hairs I never knew I had:
When they are raised, I know I'm bad"

Really impressed how that line informs the whole.  

On the other hand
the line of exploration  
soon informs the hole

Whipping you with the blast of lengthy discourse can certainly be punitive.  Provocative and fine writing.  Ouch!

sometimes the pain words
give rise to is more hurtful
than whippiest whips

This is my new favorite of yours my darling. This is what great Sub/Dom poetry is all about. It has humor fantastic description with clever twists of soliloquy and all in-between. I am more than greatly turned on to speak plainly. You really excel at your craft and this blew me away.

XoXoXo
John

the trouble is most
dominants lack anything
resembling humour