Sloping Into Paradise

hummm a taste of paradise sweet as honey upon an skillful tongue if one can just imagine a perfect paradise yummm...respect dear poetess

It's nice of you to
taste the verses so very
thoroughly I think.

you set it in motion dear poetess...respect

Speechless ... again ... *blushes* ...

I am glad you enjoyed the verses

once tasted one has a craving for bitter at first then come like pure honey
as this write dose the same
well done

Bitterness is best consigned
I try to be both nice and kind
Of honeyed so you taste
The sticky fluids which are laced
As flavours found as you caress
To take away all bitterness

yes the bitterness's gone now as pure as honey as all your words that you set to the pages of your sweet writes

This is my favorite of your erotica.  Paradise is found.

Hell will be next - I wonder if it will be more than other people.  Your enjoyment does me the power of good

Hot write SweetOblivion, well done

I am so pleased you shared your enjoyment with me

Glad they built your appetite to your taste

The myriad ways you write of submission are unparalleled. And here surrender must occur lest the invitation to paradise is let go. Truly a gorgeous expose on the pleasures of yielding. if I may be so bold I noticed your attribution of the phrase "sloping into paradise" to golden mist. If I am thy muse for this poem then I am even more gratified.  

XoXoXo
John

I think you commented along those lines and the phrase appealed to me - so I set the rest of the verses down to satisfy my curiosity - with thoughts of Hades, Sisyphus, and, oddly, Ged, the Arch Mage chasing his shadow, in an Ursula le Guin tale in mind.  

Always wanted to read “The Left Hand of Darkness”. Thanks for sharing your thematic background for this delightful poem.

It's good if you like political sci fi