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I Need Your Blessing, Father
So young, I'm just starting out
getting to know all the cute pups
I look to my dad to figure life out
Until I know what love is about
He's got me through the downs and the ups
So glad you are there, ambitions we share
When I fall in love, I know you will care
Puppy love aint safe enough
Without your blessing Father
You protect me when it's tough
I know you love this daughter
I'm big enough to think this through
but I still have faith in trusting you
We'll talk this over; figure things out
You, dear daddy, know what love's about
He's got me through the downs and the ups
So glad you are there, ambitions we share
When I fall in love, I know you will care
Puppy love aint safe enough
Without your blessing Father
You protect me when it's tough
I know you love this daughter
getting to know all the cute pups
I look to my dad to figure life out
Until I know what love is about
He's got me through the downs and the ups
So glad you are there, ambitions we share
When I fall in love, I know you will care
Puppy love aint safe enough
Without your blessing Father
You protect me when it's tough
I know you love this daughter
I'm big enough to think this through
but I still have faith in trusting you
We'll talk this over; figure things out
You, dear daddy, know what love's about
He's got me through the downs and the ups
So glad you are there, ambitions we share
When I fall in love, I know you will care
Puppy love aint safe enough
Without your blessing Father
You protect me when it's tough
I know you love this daughter
Published 19th Feb 2020
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19th Feb 2020 9:19pm
Your father always be there for you. When your were a teen he be there scared the shit out of the first boy who asked you to a dance. That is job to make sure that boys intentions were pure. Keep on writing.
20th Feb 2020 00:22am
Anonymous
20th Feb 2020 5:55am
This one spoke to my heart, grievously many young ladies don't know who their earthly father is these days, & very little of our Heavenly Father. We are the fortunate ones who know both. Well done. Blessings
20th Feb 2020 5:59am
Anonymous
20th Feb 2020 6:06am
Always keep HIM with me!!! Blessings
Anonymous
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20th Feb 2020 6:55pm
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20th Feb 2020 7:12pm
I've known some really nice dads... my husband being the sweetest ive ever seen. I wrote this for my twelve year old vocalist.
... I love late father. mine had problems but he loved me and gave me his blessing! That's for sure! Glad he did; I needed it!
... I love late father. mine had problems but he loved me and gave me his blessing! That's for sure! Glad he did; I needed it!
20th Feb 2020 7:06pm
20th Feb 2020 7:14pm
Thanks, man! I appreciate the feedback. You moght even see a follow up music video, so stay tuned...
