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Too Soon Yet Too Late
Describing its arc in words I had read,
A cavalier speaker my fate.
In a cryptic tongue of semaphore shed,
You’re leaving too soon yet too late.
What happened to me before I could feel
Came sooner by the heart to rout.
But what happened to you didn’t seem real,
Was too late for me to find out.
I don’t understand how some treat a soul
The way thoughtless ones did to you.
Your poet’s innocence they freely stole,
To take control but had no clue.
It looks very soon I’ll be where you won’t,
A graveyard in verse I will walk.
I’ll see no more days to read what you wrote,
A world of your past will I haunt:
With crusty bread, red wine, pâté and you,
To share afternoons, table set.
Two poets linger, no rush coming to,
Recalling the first time we met.
A Tuscany in Autumn’s nakedness,
To revel in a promised breeze.
The rain came to dampen a happiness
Among the valley’s olive trees.
A flght in Summer, what it was about,
I picked daisies hearing you laugh.
To suddenly see the jump of a trout,
I never felt this was the last.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 18th Feb 2020
| Edited 20th Feb 2020
Author's Note
• 10/8/10/8 stanza syllable count
• a/b/a/b rhyme scheme
• a/b/a/b rhyme scheme
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Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
18th Feb 2020 4:55am
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18th Feb 2020 4:58am
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
18th Feb 2020 7:36am
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Dear Didier, please always remember... even in darker times, no one is more worthy to be where they love and want to be than you.
This poetic gift, I was so moved to do it for you with what little I have. I have been filled with sadness lately, but look what someone can do for another when they care...
turning it into something that has made you feel changed, just as knowing you and your art has changed me.
Thank you so much🙏🏻
Jade💌
This poetic gift, I was so moved to do it for you with what little I have. I have been filled with sadness lately, but look what someone can do for another when they care...
turning it into something that has made you feel changed, just as knowing you and your art has changed me.
Thank you so much🙏🏻
Jade💌
Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
18th Feb 2020 9:03am
A giving Write Jade,
The breath of timbre is pitch perfect empathy and compassion.
Gorgeous to say the least,Well worthy RL here!!!
The breath of timbre is pitch perfect empathy and compassion.
Gorgeous to say the least,Well worthy RL here!!!
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Re: Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
18th Feb 2020 9:56am
Thank you, my friend, you who have long earned the right to be known as ‘Soul’. I’m so deeply touched by you coming here to express your thoughts, and for an honor of place. It’s hard for me to say more just now...
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3rd Mar 2020 2:25pm
Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
18th Feb 2020 10:42am
Dear JP,
For me there is such an echo of loneliness and trying to reel in feelings of sadness and regret of not being in the same emotional space at the same time with this piece. The beauty of friendship woven so sweetly throughout but the lingering “what if I’d...” feels left unfinished. This is a work that called back a melancholy memory for me. You’ve penned it gorgeously, I would have only been able to write I was mad then very sad! Beautiful write as per, my sweet friend. H🌷
For me there is such an echo of loneliness and trying to reel in feelings of sadness and regret of not being in the same emotional space at the same time with this piece. The beauty of friendship woven so sweetly throughout but the lingering “what if I’d...” feels left unfinished. This is a work that called back a melancholy memory for me. You’ve penned it gorgeously, I would have only been able to write I was mad then very sad! Beautiful write as per, my sweet friend. H🌷
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Re: Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
18th Feb 2020 10:56am
I can hardly see for the weep, beautiful Poetess...
I wish I could add your heart-rendering comment to my Reading List!
Thank you, Honoria, for making this memorable.🙏🏻
ever
Jade🐾🌻
I wish I could add your heart-rendering comment to my Reading List!
Thank you, Honoria, for making this memorable.🙏🏻
ever
Jade🐾🌻
Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
18th Feb 2020 2:59pm
Outside of the technical aspect of this write ( which are excellent), the emotions communicated were of the highest human standard. Superb write Jade. Goes on my reading list.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Dear Kitty...
my thanks, for such exquisitely direct thoughts and the honor from you, are eternal.
hug fest,
Jade
my thanks, for such exquisitely direct thoughts and the honor from you, are eternal.
hug fest,
Jade
Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
18th Feb 2020 7:58pm
Beautifully structured and rhymed. The paradox of the title is perfect. Wonderful...
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Re: Re. Too Soon Yet Too Late
20th Feb 2020 8:05am
Thank you, dear Thomas, and you are wonderful too! Open to many possibilities.
RL appreciation🙏🏻
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RL appreciation🙏🏻
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22nd Feb 2020 6:02am
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23rd Feb 2020 1:05pm
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“ A windswept crush in secret ” has inspired you? Thank you for letting me know, dear Poet; I am very honored.
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23rd Feb 2020 6:12pm
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