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Anticipation

You've been staring at me for a while now
Making it obvious I see
Are you flirting with me?

As you slide your skirt higher
My pants become a little tighter
Are you also thinking of the deed?

As you lick your lips
And wriggle those hips
I can't help but think of taking sips
From inside those luscious lips
And you can increase those dips
To take it in further
Sweet sexy one
You look like fun

I can smell you from over here
While you're itching closer my dear
I feel your breath on my mouth
Can't help the growing size down south

Let's close the door behind us
And allow this sexual energy to bind us
Into a world only we'll know
With seeds we will both sow
Into each other's minds and hearts to grow
Into something wonderful
Under the moon's glow.

Written by SAngel

Published 15th Feb 2020

#lover #sex

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Re. Anticipation

Solomon_Song

15th Feb 2020 7:46pm

Fatal attraction. Favourite verse:

I can smell you from over here
While you're itching closer my dear
I feel your breath on my mouth
Can't help the growing size down south

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Re. Anticipation

Sex_on_the_Joe (Joe-D)

22nd Feb 2020 2:44pm

I do love your rhyme schemes.... This piece is a lovely treat for me to gobble up.... You have a great mind and potential... Just one question.... Can you make your pieces a little more challenging for the reader??? Can you throw the reader off their thoughts and play with their mind as you play with your words???? Keep your readers second guessing and don't be afraid to add in plot twists and turns that make them have multiple reactions and conclusions when it comes to their final opinion of their judgements of your pieces.... You are an exceptional writer my dear.... With each piece a poet puts up on the chopping block it challenges their skill both mentally and emotionally... Accept feed back from other poets no matter how harsh or critical they may be... Use these comments as fuel to fire your soul..... I will be watching you my fair poetess....

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Re. Anticipation

SAngel

23rd Feb 2020 4:11am

Hey Sex on the Joe, wow sounds like hard work lol! A lot of the time I don't put much thought into the poem, it writes itself, but I appreciate your feedback and will take it on board. Thanks for the kind things you have said as well.