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I Decided (An Inspired Haiku)
love Left the moment
Anger became consequence
never again Whole.
Anger became consequence
never again Whole.
Author's Note
I worked with my students last week on writing a Haiku. I teach Social Studies... But today was inspired by a DU poet to share a haiku after reading his... thanks in abundance!
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Re. I Decided (An Inspired Haiku)
Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 7:40pm
Simply brilliant, thank you for this
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Re: Re. I Decided (An Inspired Haiku)
11th Feb 2020 11:58pm
Greetings,
Thanks for taking the time to explore my world... I was so inspired this am... glad the intentions met you!!!
Thanks for taking the time to explore my world... I was so inspired this am... glad the intentions met you!!!
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11th Feb 2020 7:57pm
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11th Feb 2020 11:59pm
Greetings,
Your haiku is awesome... I’m going to do another one soon... look forward to seeing another from you!!!
Your haiku is awesome... I’m going to do another one soon... look forward to seeing another from you!!!
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Re. I Decided (An Inspired Haiku)
12th Feb 2020 3:55pm
Much feeling and passage of time in these few lines. Well rendered.
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Re: Re. I Decided (An Inspired Haiku)
12th Feb 2020 4:04pm
Greetings,
Thanks... this space is growing me each moment.. Look out for the harvest... Again thanks for checking in and checking up!!
Thanks... this space is growing me each moment.. Look out for the harvest... Again thanks for checking in and checking up!!