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You’re Looking Rather Smug
Brush it under the rug
No need to tell the neighbors
Hush now while I yell at you
And ask you to do favors
I crave your compliments
They build me up in esteem
For I am your Lord Master
And you willingly do my bidding
Let me pull the strings, babe
Trust me, I’m an expert
Deceit is my middle name
So I’ll never get arrested
Published 7th Feb 2020
| Edited 8th Dec 2021
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7th Feb 2020 3:31pm
Well written nightbirdblue. Fully communicates the nature of an abusive relationship.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Aug 2020 6:44pm
I wonder where his mind was while he chose to act this way... I still don't understand.
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15th May 2020 6:16pm
It's a very clear and concise piece. After watching several documentaries and seeing how some of these individuals who are obviously abusing women just flat out deny it that smug look on their face.
Excellent spill.
Excellent spill.
25th Aug 2020 6:47pm
I appreciate your feedback and understanding. Unfortunately I was only ever able to call the police once, and I was too afraid to press charges. I regret my inaction now, and worry about the victims of his future relationships.
26th Aug 2020 3:44pm
Anonymous
26th Aug 2020 8:34pm
very deeply moving
