Wag*

Wonderful, Tallen.

The lowercase i's really seem out of place.  If it's self-deprecating, it serves no purpose.  

the Lowercase < i's >  i've been writing this way for almost a decade and then some -- it's me.
......a while ago, i adopted this as my way to Honor other writers ----- references to me i lowercase and to to others i Uppercase.

This is not gonna change any time soon, if ever.
I have a great grasp of the American English language and so, feel, i can (and will) break the rules, especially with respect to this issue.

......anyways, i thank You for the kind praise
and thoughtful opinion.

Honored for the RL add

Pretty certain
i mentioned this about
my propensity
to use the pronouns in this way
when first You began the
Punctuation Workshop.

no Big deal to me, though,
You know one of my favorite authors -
e.e. cummings was a rebel, too  :D

I just think more highly of you than you do yourself, Tallen. :)

Huh?

(You are not alone in this, i suspect)

If you need a manservant to be your dumbwaiter, look no further. I will carry you in your Ups and Down the stairs for $20 hourly plus a room in your mansion.

You know for $20 bucks an hour
I AM GONNA GET MY MONIES WORTH!!!
& so HELL Yeah!!  You are hired!!
first thing i need You to do is clean my bed sheets!!

....the Ups & Down shit can wait

*wink*wink

Ewwwwww

wHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA???!!

I've been unattached for months!
and only dream of...........

O, O i get it!!  Damnit You have a filthy mind, JB!!

Dear T,

You are cute. I like the way you’ve incorporated a dumbwaiter into your metaphor. That was very clever. Excellent write. H🌷

Delighted You read cleverness
as i was feeling a bit "cheeky"
when i spilled this

appreciate the kind praise

I can relate to the rise and fall. A great sublime muse with fine superb poetic word choice. Kudos for this poem.

Pls Pleez do comment my newest poem too, as interaction via comments is cool I feel and thoughts are best written.

appreciate Your thoughtful comments and kind praise

So cute ... indeed ... i for one like the lowercase "i"s ... very ee cummings ... bravo dear Tallen ...

i have been writing this way for what feels like,
forever.
i always have to remember and catch myself when
writing serious papers (not poetry or prose).
The biggest err is capitalizing ...LOL

thank You for the wonderful share

more please, loved this doll
I love when smart poetry has no ego
impresses vs created to impress, I feel this is the line between a good and consummate writer
I think you've crossed this line by miles
I look forward to more

Wow -- You humble me, here with these wonderful
comments

thank You so much