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Assholes get down and dirty
Assholes at heart
are willing and able
to get down and dirty
to get the woman of
their dreams
because she's waiting
For you to get down and dirty
are willing and able
to get down and dirty
to get the woman of
their dreams
because she's waiting
For you to get down and dirty
Published 5th Feb 2020
Author's Note
Most are willing to do something crazy for the woman they love. Getting down and dirty might be a good thing
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5th Feb 2020 8:13pm
Try to make it about them as much as you. It fails to land its meaning because of the lack of depth. Write about the good and the bad. I know you can because you are talented with words. Just let it all go. Be yourself.
5th Feb 2020 8:15pm
5th Feb 2020 8:17pm
