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All I can Take
Hands begin to shake
Eyes squinting, face flushing red
Enough is enough
Eyes squinting, face flushing red
Enough is enough
Published 5th Feb 2020
Author's Note
February Senryu theme in the Haiku Pond
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5th Feb 2020 3:15pm
5th Feb 2020 11:38pm
Thank you lildragonfly
And thank you for stopping in and taking the time to read :)
And thank you for stopping in and taking the time to read :)
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
16th Feb 2020 2:28am
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16th Feb 2020 6:05am
Thank you
And thank you for stopping by to my stuff
It’s always nice to hear positive feedback :)
And thank you for stopping by to my stuff
It’s always nice to hear positive feedback :)
9th Apr 2020 9:39am
Unfortunately, I feel we can all relate to some extent...
With these few words you really brought the emotion to life. Not a good feeling, at all.
With these few words you really brought the emotion to life. Not a good feeling, at all.
9th Apr 2020 10:15am
No, not a good feeling at all, but a feeling that can not be avoided.
If you care, if you love, it will evntually be a feeling that needs be confronted
What defines the person is how they deal with this feeling when it rears its ugly head.
Thank you NB
If you care, if you love, it will evntually be a feeling that needs be confronted
What defines the person is how they deal with this feeling when it rears its ugly head.
Thank you NB
9th Apr 2020 10:46am
