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Lost In You
Will dissolve
Like liquid
Pouring into the pores
Of your skin
Become vapour
That you slowly
Breathe in
Then you will know
How you make me feel
Will no longer be bound
By the gravity of this world
Weightless in your arms
Completely lost
In the universe of your eyes
Like liquid
Pouring into the pores
Of your skin
Become vapour
That you slowly
Breathe in
Then you will know
How you make me feel
Will no longer be bound
By the gravity of this world
Weightless in your arms
Completely lost
In the universe of your eyes
Published 2nd Feb 2020
| Edited 20th Jul 2020
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2nd Feb 2020 5:20am
AP This is a beautiful lil spill
Put a smile on y face
Thank you for sharing
Put a smile on y face
Thank you for sharing
2nd Feb 2020 6:10am
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2020 10:01am
NICE!
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2020 12:16pm
It's a wonderful metaphor, AP; investing yourself into someone as if with the effort of a long drawn out oil massage - s/he absorbing the care you invested, appreciating you with each inhalation.
2nd Feb 2020 4:12pm
Gorgeous spill
reminded me of wrestling (naked) with a lover using olive oil -- lots of sliding and giggling in play
reminded me of wrestling (naked) with a lover using olive oil -- lots of sliding and giggling in play
2nd Feb 2020 4:36pm
2nd Feb 2020 6:56pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 10:45am
2nd Feb 2020 10:49pm
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