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bed and breakfast
rabbits in the garden before breakfast
takes root I slip outside for a smoke and
the rabbits disappear and I choke over
bacon and eggs you poor bloke she says ..
Published 26th Jan 2020
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hang over morning in stratford upon avon
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26th Jan 2020 2:19am
rabbits in the garden before breakfast
Fabulous line! Love the alliteration and consonance!
LOL @ the hangover! Sometimes it's worth it, Paul!
Fabulous line! Love the alliteration and consonance!
LOL @ the hangover! Sometimes it's worth it, Paul!
