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Twilight Sky
Rising for the day
Over cloudy fields of cotton
A sliver of light points the way
As the dark has been forgotten
Twilight colors shine bright
Painting the ceiling in pastel hues
It’s not day, it’s not night
Just a lovely view
Over cloudy fields of cotton
A sliver of light points the way
As the dark has been forgotten
Twilight colors shine bright
Painting the ceiling in pastel hues
It’s not day, it’s not night
Just a lovely view
Published 25th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Written for the “your sky” competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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26th Jan 2020 3:09am
Dear W,
Oooohhhh that is a beautiful picture to a beautiful poem. I love the straight forward observation of the piece. Just enjoy what is right before you nothing more. Gorgeous write.
H 🌷
Oooohhhh that is a beautiful picture to a beautiful poem. I love the straight forward observation of the piece. Just enjoy what is right before you nothing more. Gorgeous write.
H 🌷
26th Jan 2020 3:18am
Thank you for your kind words Honoria
and for taking the time to stop by :)
Glad you enjoyed it
and for taking the time to stop by :)
Glad you enjoyed it
29th Jan 2020 00:03am
It is a pretty view to be waking up to no matter the hour of the day/night :)
xx
xx
29th Jan 2020 00:09am
9th Apr 2020 9:41am
9th Apr 2020 10:06am
Thank you NB
Yes I did, just up the road from my driveway over the cotton field
I am glad you enjoyed it
Thank you for stopping by and taking time to read my stuff, and for all the adds to your reading list
Your support is appreciated
Yes I did, just up the road from my driveway over the cotton field
I am glad you enjoyed it
Thank you for stopping by and taking time to read my stuff, and for all the adds to your reading list
Your support is appreciated
9th Apr 2020 10:48am
You're most welcome! Just showing you the long due respect you deserve :)
Artist/poet. I miss a lot of stuff! Especially in the months I am absent here. I enjoy your works and your personality quirks.
Artist/poet. I miss a lot of stuff! Especially in the months I am absent here. I enjoy your works and your personality quirks.
