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I Miss
I miss being cuddled and hugged from behind,
Lately having a relationship again is all that's been on my mind.
I mean...being single isn't so bad,
But there is this feeling being in love brings...I just miss the way it felt.
I use to miss looking into his eyes, feeling my inside burn, feeling a thousand butterflies,
It's like he saw my soul, I just gave him the remote and he had full control.
I use to miss hearing “you're beautiful” and lighting up brighter than a bulb, I mean...i hear it from others,
But from him...from him it mattered most.
I use to miss miss hearing the words “i love you” and just crying with tears of joy lol
He'd ask “why the tears?” but through my happiness words I could not find,
This feeling!, I couldn't explain what was on my mind.
Ah those were the good days, when things were new❤
Before the power got to his head,
I miss the old you...but now I wanna feel that love for someone new
Someone who won't make me feel insecure or cry just because they can,
Someone who can see this heart of mine and love me just the way I am
Lately having a relationship again is all that's been on my mind.
I mean...being single isn't so bad,
But there is this feeling being in love brings...I just miss the way it felt.
I use to miss looking into his eyes, feeling my inside burn, feeling a thousand butterflies,
It's like he saw my soul, I just gave him the remote and he had full control.
I use to miss hearing “you're beautiful” and lighting up brighter than a bulb, I mean...i hear it from others,
But from him...from him it mattered most.
I use to miss miss hearing the words “i love you” and just crying with tears of joy lol
He'd ask “why the tears?” but through my happiness words I could not find,
This feeling!, I couldn't explain what was on my mind.
Ah those were the good days, when things were new❤
Before the power got to his head,
I miss the old you...but now I wanna feel that love for someone new
Someone who won't make me feel insecure or cry just because they can,
Someone who can see this heart of mine and love me just the way I am
Published 21st Jan 2020
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21st Jan 2020 10:31pm
we must be careful of the power that we give others over us, because love is an immeasurable force. There has been a lot of amazing things accomplished in it's name. Tight
23rd Jan 2020 9:18pm
Feelings are a hard thing to explain. Great poem and I could feel the emotion in every word.
24th Jan 2020 1:56pm
Its a beautiful feeling indeed. Yet ive been in love with the same woman for years she passed a few years ago due to cancer. Yet my love for her still as strong why i cant move on. You have talent keep it up dear.
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26th Jan 2020 10:19pm
This reads with such pure vulnerability and honesty, it sings it's way through the mind's eye to the river of the heart. Love the touches of intimate detail that create the scene. Great technique. 💖
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Daniel
I would be thrilled if you would consider sending us an audio recording of this to be featured on the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. Audio readings at dimensions through your vocal intonations and inflections and the feature will hopefully lead to interest in your work and new friendships. If you will consider, it, please send an audio file, usually an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the title of the poem to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
to miss a love is very sad and heart breaking in itself but the greatest things about love is the things that we miss when its gone leaving behind memories of a past once lived and loved this is written very beautifully...respect
