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YOUR POWER OVER ME
Your power over me
took my virginity;
I slid effortlessly
into your golden V,
given offeringly
by one of such beauty.
You took a liberty,
coming seductively
with your maturity,
unveiled for me to see.
Thus we illicitly
united bodily.
took my virginity;
I slid effortlessly
into your golden V,
given offeringly
by one of such beauty.
You took a liberty,
coming seductively
with your maturity,
unveiled for me to see.
Thus we illicitly
united bodily.
Published 18th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Not autobiographical. Sparked by hearing Harry Styles' song of same title as this poem.
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18th Jan 2020 1:41pm
18th Jan 2020 3:16pm
this is a tight little piece; love the brevity so power-packed into a succinct form.
It's a timeless story, Solomon; the younger man/older woman scenario;
And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson. . .
It's a timeless story, Solomon; the younger man/older woman scenario;
And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson. . .
20th Jan 2020 6:52am
The description of the female could also apply to a young girl revealing the fullness of her development to a boyfriend (in which case the 'losing' experience is often mutual).
31st Jan 2020 6:59am
