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Him or you

He makes my spirit soften  
From the jagged edge  
You carved into my heart  
Still, you pull at me like a black hole  
 
Too often blinded by your power  
I venture much too close    
Losing hope and faith  
To your gravity    
    
His gaze is so sure that I exist within myself    
Yet you tear at my weakened sentience  
And like a shark, circling its prey  
Come quick to rip my mind to shreds    
     
He caresses the pain from my life    
Yet thoughts of you still poison me    
I’m saved by the potency of his intent, like wine    
So I drink of him to be so full    
   
I no longer need you.
Written by Marygoldmary
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Author's Note
This is about struggling to forget someone that is so bad for me.
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